What I need to improve on my second draft:
- Take guitar music out from the beginning as it sounds too relaxing
- Break up the opening credits more - maybe add who directed e.t.c
- Change opening with the logo - add "presents" at the start
- Less kissing
- Take out some of the voice over ("stupid") as it sounds childish
- Add a fade after the part where the characters are chasing each other
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